Epic!
Epic song. Only point of critism was that it took to long in my opinion to get the other instruments in.. Nice piano tho:) And cool guitar work after that, only the guitar part lasts too short :( too bad.. Great song anyways, keep it up!
-Alex\/
Yeah, I think it could be arranged a little better. Actually I did make the intro a bit longer in order to better develop it and to allow it to get to the point where I felt it was ready for the faster part to begin.
Guitar-wise, I may end up turning this into a full song anyway, and if that happens the guitar part will be expanded quite a bit.
Thanks for the review. :)
Good!:D
Good song, only I think you should've sped up the part where the main melody kicks in, the tempo there takes away some of the energetic feel of the song:O If you want to I can show you tempo changes:D
-Alex\/
Good to see you're back:)
And great song btw:) nothing too spectacular, but great song ;D
Thanks, its good to be back!
Yay!
Good full strings in the beginning you have there:) Hmm that opening synth is a bit too sharp in the beginning in my opinion, but that is fortunately gone in a few seconds. Talking about the 0:44-0:46 part here. You can really hear you've improved, and your style has become somewhat more calm. :) Good job:)
-Alex\/
Good.
Good start, gets you right in to the song, great plucked synth, and transition to melody is energetic. But that bass needs some more EQing! Its too loud in the melody parts. Another transition, good job on that. But then that bass still bugs me >:{ But, apart from that bass, great song, good job on it. Only try to get that bass right:) What program did u use?
-Alex\/
about the bass. well it didnt have any eqing at all :D only a bass boost and a compressor ( and that might explains the loudness )
this whole song isnt really eqed or mastered to perfection. it was just a fun song i made witch somehow packed out nicely.
and i used Fruity Loops :) with some help of Nexus as the plugin ( you might hear a preset somewhere lol )
Very, very good.
Great piano work in the beginning, only a little letdown in the transition from piano to lead in my opinion. And you could've done that melody transition somewhat smoother in the middle;) I'm talking about the transition around 1:58 here. And you could've pumped that kick somewhat up:)
I don't want to come over like a complete jerkass, but these are points of critism that you could improve in my opinion.
BUT! This is a great song even if I take those points into account. Great bassline work, great synth, and more: great piano work. I just love that piano. Goodjob!
-Alex\/
Yeh i knew that the 1:58 spot is a lil bid awefull xD
And the kick.. yeh it's just the kick i used for the whole song but okay
Nice u show me what i did wrong xD
Jus thanx for the awesome Review
-DJ Martcore
A tad late don't you think?^-^
Well the beginning piano was great! Only the kick came in too agressive. Ouch that jingle bells melody synth hurts my ears T_T I think you should use something less aggressive.
Well the choice of sounds is great( except for the first jingle bells melody synth ) but your percussion is somewhat too hard. Did you use any bass btw? Thats essential to a song.
Great song! Only next time you do a Jingle Bells mix, submit it when its Christmas hahahahaha.
-Alex\/
Whahaha
Well, I loved Portal, so I know exactly what the origin of this track is. It's too bad that you didn't fit the right dialogue of GlaDOS fitting to the song. The ending is great, but I didn't like the middle part, she has so much excellent speech you can put there, but IMO you shouldn't have put the bossfight dialogue in this song. Also, I think you should give the background music a bit more attention than this. I didn't feel any bass, nor heard it.However, I have excellent speakers, so I think there is just no bass. The melody got fairly annoying however, you could have made the middle part melody somewhat more interesting.
The ending and the beginning where great though, and the music fit great to the speech there :) Good job dude, only just shine it up a bit.
Alex\/
Master!
This track is soo epic! Great buildup, that male choir is really powerful! Whoah epic crash smashes! Drums! Violin/Cello! I love you guys!
Alex\/
Good
Well it is a good song, only a tad short, you could try to make it somewhat longer, add a longer intro to this song too:) And get that beat more bumping, do use an EQ on it? :D And it's a bit repetitive. Nice work though! :) I you add me on msn (ask for it on PM if you want) I could try to help you :)
Alex\/
Alright thanks =]. I'll send you a PM then. Thanks for your review.
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